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lori042499
Struggling artist posing as a business person
Registered: May 2006
Location: Melrose
Posts: 2,958
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Mon September 29, 2008 2:40pm
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Rating: 6.00
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The arrangement is pretty. The design is classic..
The roses are very pale and the arrangement may have benefitted from using a more striking rose to showcase...I would have liked to see the rose hips have a more natural placement to give the arrangement a bit looser line, like you have done with the curley willow.
Roses alone are not the best flower to use for a hogarth's curve because of their very stiff nature...but you pulled it off using the willow for some fluid motion. Good job!
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Affairs to Remember
www.affairstorememberflorist.com
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jamese
Registered User
Registered: August 2005
Location: Dade City
Posts: 393
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Mon September 29, 2008 11:08pm
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Rating: 7.00
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Good photo, crisp clean, but curly willow over shadows your design, makes roses looks like accents and not the stars! Sellable with good consumer appeal.
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shannonlovesflowers
And Design
Registered: October 2007
Location: Durango
Posts: 2,072
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Tue September 30, 2008 12:43am
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Rating: 7.00
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I think your background takes away from your design.
pretty!
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DeeDee
Registered User
Registered: July 2008
Location: Ayrshire
Posts: 197
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Tue September 30, 2008 12:26pm
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Rating: 8.00
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nice curve, I think it would have looked better with a plain background, the shineyness of the material distracts your eye
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Lizi
Registered User
Registered: November 2007
Location: Pageland
Posts: 619
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Tue September 30, 2008 12:59pm
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Rating: 7.00
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Daring using the hogarth design with rose. It works.
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Flame
Registered User
Registered: August 2007
Location: Brisbane
Posts: 561
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Wed October 1, 2008 7:13am
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Rating: 7.00
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Good how you used the lines and I do like the white rose instead of the red for a different look. Good job
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Victoria
"Choice is the engine of our evolution."
Registered: October 2002
Location: London
Posts: 8,702
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Wed October 1, 2008 10:16am
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Rating: 8.00
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A difficult design nicely done. I too would change the background... too busy.
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"The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged on the way its animals are treated." - Mahatma Gandhi
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wildflowerschicago
Registered User
Registered: March 2008
Location: Palos Heights
Posts: 1,110
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Wed October 1, 2008 10:19am
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Rating: 7.00
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great design! I like the Hogarth curve idea. With the rosehips and willow, perhaps a richer color rose (not necessarily red) would have played off the natural elements better?!?
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marigold
Registered User
Registered: February 2008
Location: Evergreen
Posts: 258
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Wed October 1, 2008 10:38am
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Rating: 6.00
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Pretty and good example of a hogarth, but, it brings me back to design
school, 1976. Different background would of made it pop.
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Dore
Stems
www.stemsaflowershop.com
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goldfish
Registered User
Registered: February 2006
Location: Huntington
Posts: 1,318
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Flowerchatter03
Registered User
Registered: October 2007
Location: Cross Lanes
Posts: 444
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Wed October 1, 2008 4:46pm
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Rating: 9.00
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I think this is really pretty and I love the roses. Even if this type of design was done a long time ago, you don't see it much today. I think the curly willow gives it a more modern look. Good job!
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Carol Bice
Carol Bice, AIFD, AAF, FAM
Registered: October 2004
Location: Hurst, Texas
Posts: 766
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Wed October 1, 2008 7:21pm
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Rating: 7.00
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Nice work.
CArol Bice
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Beth
Registered User
Registered: January 2006
Location: Vancouver (not BC), WA
Posts: 1,472
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Wed October 1, 2008 8:20pm
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Rating: 7.00
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Very nice... different! Love the rose hips.
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Sher
Sher
Registered: October 2002
Location: Sunrise the center of Fort Lauderdale
Posts: 2,155
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Wed October 1, 2008 8:56pm
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Rating: 8.00
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Nice work!
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Tuberose
Registered User
Registered: June 2007
Location: Kennewick
Posts: 560
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Thu October 2, 2008 1:36am
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Rating: 9.00
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Very nice, don't see the Hogarth much anymore
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